MEET UPS : April, July
PROGRESS REPORT ON PROJECTS APRIL 2017
My poetry projects for 2017 include,
writing 2 to 3 poems a month, sending them out into the world (then waiting a year or sometimes for ever for a response) and getting the odd one accepted,
getting involved in whatever readings and promotions I can and selling a few books. My pamphlet A Fury of Yellow has been launched in London and its Reading launch is coming up at the monthly Poetry Café at the South Street Arts Centre on April 14th
and last but not least, developing my Cafferty ‘sequence’. I remember I was in the shower one day and the rhyme ‘Cafferty/rackety’ appeared from nowhere. This gave rise to a poem which, presumably because I was on holiday in Dartmouth, included a small coastal town and gulls. I found I wasn’t quite sure what the poem was about, perhaps because of its curious provenance, but it seemed to have some life. I followed it up with a couple more Cafferty poems which I also found hard to pin much meaning on. A few more and it started to look like a sequence (for want of a better expression – there’s nothing sequential about it). I’ve let Cafferty take me where he (or possibly she) wants to go and this is the way I’d like to continue. I’ve had one of these poems accepted for publication but interestingly not the first which sort of sets the scene. At some point I’d like to bring this to a Project 2017 meeting to get some input. Mike Loveday has already kindly had a look and made some hopefully fruitful suggestions.
Another thing I’m looking at in respect of Cafferty is an illustrated version, in which the last person to appear would be Cafferty.
NOTE FROM SUE BOYLE : Robin very kindly showcased ‘A Fury of Yellow’ at the meetup in Bath on Saturday 8th April. Susan Jane Sims contributed the review she posted on the Poetry Space site on Tuesday, 7 February 2017. Ama Bolton has also reviewed Robin’s pamphlet and her piece, titled ‘Vignettes of War’, appears below. .
Poetry Space editor, Susan Jane Sims reviews A Fury of Yellow by Robin Thomas (Eyewear Aviator Series 2016)
Every reader comes to any material with their own emotional legacy and so it was with me. I began reading this brightly coloured pamphlet collection sitting in a chair by the bedside of my dying son. I even read him a couple and they made him smile. This pamphlet handles well, with the waxy cover distinctive for this series by Eyewear, pleasing to the touch. The first thing I noticed on opening is the quotation by American poet Frank O’Hara who was well known for poetic meditations on his everyday life in New York, and for his love of art. Also for name dropping so I was already imagining a particular style and subject matter within.
Now for the poems and what stood out for me: It is the relationships explored and what is unsaid, it is Robin’s empathy for people, particularly those in the watching and waiting position. How could I not be drawn to Christ Taking Leave of his Mother (p.31) based on the 1520 painting by Wolf Huber. Robin describes grief as ‘suffusing [Mary’s] body/collapsing her face softening her bones.’ Pretty much a perfect description of the physical effects of grief. And the ending: ‘Only his hands are seen, blessing His Mother/as all men bless their mothers/as all men take leave of their mothers’ is coolly poignant. Traditionally it has always been men in the centre of the action, the women, waiting, watching, weeping. Yet Robin is not condoning this, merely observing. In Expedition (p.19) the extended fantasy style metaphor allows us to imagine without a true account, the incredibly hard life of one woman, presumably the poet’s own mother. The settings of day and night, split between stanzas add a dark, wry touch to the poem particularly the ending where the woman ‘reaches the summit with a great sigh/stares into the unfathomable dark.’ My favourite on the theme of women has to be Petticoat for Marie Jalowicz Simon(p,12), a Jewish survivor of WW2 who managed to evade capture by the Nazi regime. An incredible story, already told in memoir and beautifully evoked here in Robin’s economical language.
The other poems I want to mention in this brief look at a lovely collection, are the trio of pieces that make up Theme and Variations: An experiment on a Bird in the Air Pump – Joseph Wright of Derby, 1768. (pp 23 – 25) This is intriguing. I have not heard or read of this experiment and will research it more. The poems appear to take three angles, that of the bird in The White Cockatoo, the equipment in The Pump and a natural object in the distance, The Moon. I love the way, each consecutive piece appears to give us less yet in fact gives us more so that we are drawn from the cold experimental set up of a scientist, through to human cost. I can see Frank O’Hara in this set, possibly Wallace Stevens too; both American poets and both favourites of mine. Yet that is not to say, that Robin Thomas is not original or interesting. He is both. He has clearly used his logical, scientific way of thinking; his ability to dissect and deconstruct, to write in a way that is largely fresh and inspiring and allows us to glimpse his deep compassion for all of us flawed human beings.
Susan Jane Sims, February 7th, 2017.
‘What will survive of us is love’. From An Arundel Tomb. Philip Larkin
Bath Poetry Cafe Short Poem Competition 2015 Judge’s Report
Robin Thomas from Reading submitted one of the most arresting and haunting poems in the competition. His portrait of mankind seen through the eyes of a highly intelligent extraterrestrial is both poignant and spine-chilling – an unexpected combination which makes his tautly disciplined poem And These, Gentleman linger provokingly in the memory.
The imagined extraterrestrial observer is touched by us, but his approach is necessarily clinical rather than empathetic. He comprehends the paradox of our ‘brutal acceptance’ of mortality and our ‘deep denial’. He can see how our pictures of ourselves encompass both ‘the enduring and the transient’. But restricted to drawing conclusions about us from our outward signs, he is unable to give a convincing interpretation of the painting of the naked man pierced by the hail of arrows which he is presenting to his imagined audience. ‘Attractive, isn’t it?’ he says. This forces readers of And These, Gentlemen to reflect on the real meaning of the martyrdom of Saint Sebastian, of which the word ‘attractive’ gives such a shockingly inadequate account.
The distancing technique in this impressively sparse poem is wonderfully effective in allowing the poet to ask important questions but to answer none of them, drawing his readers into deep water and ( thankfully ) leaving them there without direction to follow the poem in whatever way they will.
I was extremely pleased to find And These Gentleman on the Highly Commended list and delighted that Robin is coming to Bath to share his fascinating poem with the other competitors in the BRLSI on the Bath Poetry Cafe Competition Afternoon on Saturday 26th September.
This is how Robin introduces his own poem on the programme notes: Poems of ideas are notoriously difficult to achieve. It’s very easy for such poems to seem to want to tell their audience what to think. What I tried to do in my poem was to distance its action from what its poet might think through distancing of various kinds, including a lot of space.
originally published on Sue Boyle Poetry